I hope Josh is still in love with Felicia. Is he? He didn't even talk to her all chapter!

Aw, they're all gone. It's sad about Nikka, but maybe Felicia will be a little less jealous now.

Wouldn't it be awful if Henry read your fanfic?
Anyway, great music choices. I wish you the best of luck with life. And school (blech).

Cool. I like this so far, very well written.
Ooo, Felicia's jealous!

LOVED your alphabet game statements. haha. SON OF NEPTUNE! still majorly freaking out after like 3 days

And I know I'm awesome, hehehe. jk.

I love Zoë Nightshade! She's Kickass! WOOO!

Loved it! I loled at "Leave me alone, Addie! You can't throw me in juvy!"

Write more soon!

I think your story is really good so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!

You should check out my story for How I Survived Middle School, The New Girls.

Great job so far!

I love how you based this on real life. Great so far!

Don't try to switch POVs. It ruins the story's flow. Also, don't add to many OCs. It doesn't show a lot of the original characters. That's all.

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Omygosh gyyrl, I absolutely love the start to this story! It makes me want to read more!

I am a very picky reader, but I'm really thinking that this story could be ahh-mazing if you continued! Keep it up (Please!) :)

This is amazing, as usual. Weird how no one writes in this category... I haven't read the How I Survived Middle School books in such a long time though.