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i loved chibi freddy

That's adorable. I love it.

"I think we should d-do it ag- again" :D :D :D love te humour and the romance and I think you got their personalities just right xx amazing story xxx

Excellent work. Easy to imagine this is where the roots of the Fred/Daphine relationship began to grow.

1,2,3, and AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! that was cute I suck at giving reviews so im just gonna use this space to tell you that that was super cute and you should write more like that, you wrote it well and nothing seemed forced or out of place. thankyou for bringing a little more cute into the world! :)

Aw, so sweet! Loved it!

I used to watch a Pup Named Scooby Doo- well, that's an understatement. When I was little, I was OBSESSED with it. I always wanted Fred and Daphne to get together, of course. :)

Once again, you wrote an amazing story. (: You're one of my fav authors on this sight.

Loved the story, loved the Fraphne, loved Fred's reaction to the magazines, lol.

Write more Fraphne soon! :)

-Maria

Aww! I loved it! You really made it feel like they were...well, my age ;D Excellente!

i loved this(:

i think you captured them great!

and i haven't seen that show in soo long but i do remember jenkins (or however uspell it) popping out from nowere haha and loved the red herring bit :D

Aww totally cute. Loved the last paragraph - "It's Red Herring!"

No offense to all you Fred fans out there, but Fred is an idiot. Case closed. That reminds me of Daphne's big "Boys are Stupid" speech in Mystery Incorporated. :D

Baha! The part where Fred finds all the newspapers is downright hilarious. I think you captured their younger personalities perfectly.