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| Miss.Rainbow.Sunshine. 2007-01-19 ch 4,  | abuseIt was a good story, but for some reason it really appeal to me that much because I'm an egoshipper. I think that you should try and make Chapter 5 even better than all the other chapters. Add some sensory details, descriptions, and more suspense. That's just my opinion so don't take it personally or anything. =) *Belle*Harmonie* |
| d 2006-01-12 ch 4, anon. | abusegreat storie update soon. |
| Dark Shadow Wings 2005-06-22 ch 4, | abuseOMG THAT IS SO... *thinking* ROMANTIC! it's definitely stories like yours that really make me wish i had a bf... u did alike WICKED good job... i loved it! it was great! keep writing! |
| Blind Sabre 2003-09-25 ch 4, | abuseThis fic is so beautiful. I kinda feel bad for Shigeru though, but AAML forever! |
| Usually Immaculate Aristocr... 2003-04-12 ch 4, | abusewow. thnis is a cool story! really good. keep it up |
| Thundermage 2002-11-05 ch 4, | abuseThis was a good fic. Keep up the good work! Jeez, I'm running out of things to say in my reviews. A few grammatical errors here and there, but I've seen them in every fic I've read so you shouldn't feel bad about it. Everyone makes mistakes so there's no point in getting in a bad mood about it. Well, seeing as I don't know what else to say, have a good day! See ya! |
| Lil gal 2002-08-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseOMG!~! Gomen Gomen^^. Sorry for posting that rude comment on your other fic.. I didn't see this kawaii amml fic. Its good, and the best thing of all... IT'S AN AAML FIC AND NOT SOME STUPID GAML FIC!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! *notices everybody staring* heh heh |
| Blondie 2002-07-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh my gosh I cried I can't believe you did that i was almost positive she'd end up with Gary!!!! Though I LOVE Ash and misty couplings I do also like the rare but good Misty and Gary couple!!! Good job!!!!! |
| Gemma 2002-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey Sass it's ur little sis!! Well, let's see, I know that YOU like this story, but I kinda knew everything that was gonna happen anyway, so it was pretty yeah, predictable. You're telling me to just be honest right now, so here goes. It was alright, but do ALL your stories have to be romance and AAML, or make it end up that way? It gets a bit tedious. Sorry if I'm being a **, but I'm doing what you told me to do. |
| Nova S. 2002-03-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt may have been a long struggle but the results can't be argued with. Nice going. |
| Nova S. 2002-03-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseOhh they finally confessed. But what will happen with this little soap drama? Guess I'll find out this comming chapter. Till then. |
| Nova S. 2002-03-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseOohh boy. Trouble in paradise so quick. *Sacastic*:Gee you couldn't see That comming. (Hopeful) Does this mean that Mist might join up with Ash again soon? |
| Nova S. 2002-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell I guess I have to say Way To Go Misty! Bringing out the 'nicer' side to Gary. Also congrats on Gary showing Trust in Misty even though he does have inner doubts. |
| Jenny 2002-03-19 ch 4, anon. | abuseIs the next part ready yet???? This story is really good!!!! ^_^ |
| Silver Princess 2002-03-13 ch 4, | abuseThank you for ending in AAML! The GAML just...i don't know, i have no words for it. anyways. Great story! |