Hey, just one mistake i found in this chapter, Ecklie is the Assistant Director of the Las Vegas Crime Lab. You have him written as the Dayshift Supervisor, he used to be the dayshift supervisor till he got the promotion and then separated Grissom's Team. Other than that it was a really good chapter.

TTFN PhillG

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! Fantastic job! 3 the boys!

OMG, I can't believe its finished, but that was such a great ending. I think they make great parents, and those adorable little children were perfect for them. I'm so glad that Nicky stuck with his list and that they stuck together, doing the things they love. I don't think you should do a sequel, even though I am sad to see it end, I completely agree with you on the not dragging it out part.

Thank you for the amazing story, Holly!

You ROCK! ;)

I loved the proposal idea, it was amazingly well written. The clues and things were great. Excellent idea ;)

Aw this was cute, a perfect ending.

Excellant as always! I love how sweet and romantic you always make them! I just wish it could play out on my screen. Maybe someday. A girl can only hope!

I just have to say, that I love this story. Actually, come to think of it I love everything of yours I've read, sorry I haven't reviewed all of them, I don't actually have an account with Fanfiction, but I just realised I could review without having one.

Without You, I'd come for you and Week to Remember were all my joint favourites before this, and I love the new M-Preg's that you got going too, but now that I've finally read this one to the end, it's my new fav story in the world. I love how you developed the relationship from the grave danger episode and made them so real and true to their characters on the show. You've had me laughing, crying and gripping the the edge of my seat in suspense, and I love it! And I especially love Greg's family. That Jean is a riot! and the proposal idea was just amazing.

I love the way you write your characters. Unlike a lot of fanfiction writers, they're a lot more believable as real people, instead of just a person with a name that you decided to add. They're so three dimensional, I feel disappointed that they're not actually on the TV show lol.

I think I would definetly be disappointed if they were to make Greg's mother visit him on the show and he was nothing like your Jean, because shes so amazing and protective of her little boy.

I loved the realistic plot too. They didn't dive into sex after suddenly saying 'i love you', they slowly developed their friendship into this relationship and helped each other to become more comfortable with one another, which was just amazing!

You are truley an amazing author Holly, I just purchased your book and I hope you continue to write more soon, because I am your BIGGEST fan :P You're obviously a very dedicated writer, because you continue to write fanfiction when you could be publishing your own work for us collect.

Thanks so much for writing this and making me fall in love with your work. I can't wait to see what you come up with next, you have me waiting on the edge of my seat in suspense, because I know it'll be GREAT!

with love and hugs for the best writer out there

- Angela

I really did enjoy this story :D You're such a good writer. Thank you for this awesome story!

Awww that was so cute sorry I didn't review all the story but it was brilliant and I loved the ending so cute :)

Great story and a very beautiful ending. I totally agree Nick and Greg would make great parents with the balance of their personalities! They remind me of Jean and Daniel! You did aan excellant job as always!

it was good...was surprised you ended it.

alisa

Wow, so today we get a new princess AND Nick & Greg get married, yayyy we are blessed :)

So sad it ended, but pleased of the happy ending :)

great story)

gonna miss it)

Loved it all the way

Perfect ending. Absolutely perfect.