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| Reviews for Control |
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  Bunn 2/10/13 . chapter 8 Yes! Yes! Order that pizza! |
| Lighter 1/8/13 . chapter 1 I love this. I really do, and I'll tell you why. The writing is clear and understandable for a first time out. Oh honey was mine ever a mess, but I got better. So, hugs to you on that. This line: Colt nodded, "Of course. I can only fake so much remorse though, and that quota was used up a few hours ago." made me laugh out loud, I swear. I've thought that so many times in my life its scary. This was such a happy find because you don't see many Colt stories that aren't just romance based because someone had a song in their head. Thank you for writing whats running around up there ahaha. A critic hmmm, oh. Maybe some more detail. What kind of day was it out, that sort of thing whenever you'd like to lengthen. But your human background, the chanting kids for example, spot on loved it. |
| Guest 12/30/12 . chapter 7 Love the story update soon |
 FairyDust353 12/3/12 . chapter 7Love the connection at the end! |
| Guest 12/1/12 . chapter 7 ahh happy birthday :) lovely chapter cant wait till your next upload and hope you have a wonderful birthday |
| FairyDust353 11/26/12 . chapter 6 So happy that you updated! I am excited to see Colt meeting someone nice ;) |
| Guest 11/26/12 . chapter 6 Nice chapter ahaah that girl reminds me of me ahhaha when I meet some new people I tell little fibs here and there ahhahah and man if I was colt and my dad said I couldn't go to y grandpas I'd drop kick his butt lol upload soon |
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 5 uh oh could you upload another chapter possibly i like this |
| heartbrokenlover13 8/18/11 . chapter 5 Amazing! |
| kei-kanna-chan 8/15/11 . chapter 4 Please Please Please Please Please update this fic. Its great so far. Though please continue this fic since there aren't that many 3 ninjas fics. kei .;; |
| DropDeadKait 7/22/11 . chapter 4 Next. Now. I want more! ANd alittle romance, please?:) |
| heartbrokenlover13 7/22/11 . chapter 4 Amazing |
| academy girl 7/9/11 . chapter 4 I just started too read your story and i have to say its really good pleas update soon |
| FairyDust353 3/20/11 . chapter 2 YAY! An update! As I said in my last review, I really like this story and I think you are doing a fabulous job! Keep it up and I can't wait until the next chapter! |
| FairyDust353 3/20/11 . chapter 1 To be honest this is probably the best written 3 Ninja's story I have read as of late! I hope that you decide to keep writing the story. I would love to see where you are going with this! Keep up the good work :D |
