Well, after that last action-packed chapter this one was great. I imagine it would probably happen almost exactly like that in real life (I'm an avid watcher of CSI and all the other crime shows). I'm impressed you can carry this dog-perspective thing off so well. It's great.

Anyway... Can't think of a different fandom this would fit in... but I'm sure it would work on fictionpress if all else fails...

On a different note, I started rereading Eragon earlier and discovered where you found the name Fundor. Weird.

ARTY

Well, yep, surprise. Me again.

That whole gun scene from the dog's point of view was pretty good, actually. I didn't know how it would work, but it did.

I know the lack of reviews is discouraging, and it will remain so. And you make ultimatums with your readers and they still don't review. It's a shame but it happens.

On a slightly different note, however, would it surprise you to know that I also have an account on fictionpress? :P Trust me, I get around on these websites. If you move it, lemme know, and the other Arty Thrip over there is me also :)

ARTY

Such a shame I'm currently your only reviewer. You've chosen a fandom that doesn't really have many regulars, it seems.

Josh died? :'( I liked Josh.

Aww, poor Joan. That's just depressing...

Please add more soon!

ARTY

Aww, your favourite reviewer? That's strangely touching, since I'm one of those reviewers that will review anything, even something I've never seen, never read... :)

At first I was slightly confused about how this dog could be so intelligent, but I suppose it is possible. Only intelligent dogs would really be able to cope with and understand the prospect of speech... I did, however, like the way that you haven't personified your characters too much, since that's always a bit difficult with something like a talking dog.

Gunshots huh? I'm intrigued as to what will happen next, but for some reason cliffhangers often get lost on me, so sorry you don't receive a better reaction to that :)

Anyway, I like it!

ARTY

Hmm, interesting.

I'll admit I had a little trouble concentrating, probably because of the blasted radio blaring away on the other side of the room, but I like it.

Up is a great film, and I always was surprised that there was nothing about collars that made dogs talk before it came out.

I like how it's from the point of view of one of the dogs. That really seems the only way to do it. If you add more I shall offer you a full verdict then :)

ARTY