So beautiful :( I don't know why that's sad. I mean, it's really, really good. Sad because they only lived for another four years? I think that's it. Great story!

I love it! James and Lily is the best couple ever!

awww loved your story! .

OH YEAH BABY! SUCK MY PUSSY BITCH! SUCK IT! SUCK IT GOOD!ooooooh! ooooooooooooh! oooooooooooooh!

That was so sweet, it was so loving and caring and fun

Aww, I loved this! It was really well written and super cute. Lily and James are so wonderful D

Very well written. The conclusion of this story tied it up quite well. It was a nice mixtureof all things. a little humor, fluff, hope, Christmas, and misteltoe. Well done.

Very cute! Loved it!

Beautiful 3

Excellent

For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

www . sapientimagic . com (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Annabelle Morrow, SUM student