whoa. But in a good way :)

I liked it, and I didn't mind the length, short and simple.

Very powerful ending! I liked the diet metaphor, very like Daisies to apply a detailed metaphor to the situation ;) and I liked that life was sour on Chuck's lips, and Ned kissed it off

great fic :)

Nicely written! Although if that line implies what I think it does ... ouch. And poor Chuck! (And Ned!)