I wish I could write humour like you do :/ Ur really awesome!

Look its a Max Remy fanfiction! I didn't even think these things existed.

Now onto the serious business *puts on serious face*. I think you wrote Max, like, perfectly. The grumpy, clumsyness of her. I think the idea of making her wear the dress was very amusing. I laughed out loud at "You can't keep trying to bribe me with Linden," and the breaking her ankle comment :D

This was a really cute fluffy story. You should write more Mex Remy :D

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Good job Chickie.

I love this! Max comes to life as soon as you start to read this story. I would really like to see her in the pink dress and strappy shoes.I bet she looks great.

Brilliant!

From Deb Abela