Excellent beginning! This is very well-written, eloquent, and descriptive!

this story is too good to go untouched, please please wrtie more!

I loved this story. It was wonderful that you created a sort of female counterpart to Alex. I especially loved your choice of making Evangeline obsessed with Tchaikovsky and The Nutcracker. Who isn't? :) You mixed her in to the original story in an awesome and believable way. Will there be any more chapters? I'd love to know how it ends for them.

Yay an update!

Please write more

please continue this as quickly as possibly! so horrorshow!

This is a very good story! Please keep writing!

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you