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-insert what you expect Carmie to say here-

I should really check for updates more often. Oh, and I'm added you to author alert.

I almost never leave reviews but I didn't think it was that bad of a story, infact, I enjoyed it... It depresses me to see you give up on it. (T T)

And this is the review you forced me to write. Well maybe "forced" is to strong of a word. I would be lieing if I said I didn't enjoy this. Sadly I gots no ideas.

The last update was 4-24-11. You should really tell your friends Writer's and Block to take a hike.

Freaking great job! :D

Update soon plzzz

Good chapter dude. Can't wait for the next one. I guess I'll update soon.

yeah im lazy. so what? good chapter. though i feel you couldve done with jolteons pov on the fight scene. excellent besides that

yay. very good...but short. make em longer :D

lol funny stuff. keep it up man.

looking good dude. keep up the good work

This was amazing. I can't wait for the next update. And was the tv show reference the one about Paul and the Chimchar? GOOD LUCK!

WOOOHOOOO! That was AWESOME! Dude you should try to make them longer though. that was like short. if u make it longer, youll attract more people. i think

This seems good. im about to read the next chapter and cant wait

Well now...you should explain what thoughts and authors notes are. but besides that' it was good!