I love this pairing, and I've read this story a while back, but was too scared to review (whoot, Ducky the brave)(rolls eyes). So...I love this kind of take. Like, Romeo and Juliet meet insane asylum status.
:) I've been waiting forever from a new story from you! Very well written and very sad also. The words and characterization were very powerful. I didn't notice any grammatical errors either. Yet another one of your stories for the favorites!