 Christella58 2/10/12 . chapter 1you fooled me completely! I thought they really were getting married!
Well done! |
 Sirius I'm Serious 3/27/11 . chapter 1I was wondering how Serena and Darien were going to get married when she was only 14! I must admit that that ending really did surprise me (although now that I think about it, it makes a lot of sense!) Really great job, and I hope that you continue to write stories like this in the future. |
 SMK 9/22/03 . chapter 1This story was awesome! I just posted a fanfic about Serena and Darien's wedding. Be sure to check it out and keep up the good work! :D |
 hi 7/5/03 . chapter 1 cute story, I like the end the best it was all an act. |
 GreenLeoFiend 2/11/03 . chapter 1LOL, great job. Cute story.
-Stef |
 Nintendo Maximus 7/21/02 . chapter 1Don't get me wrong, I support Serena/Darien, but this fanfic's outcome is rather unoriginal. It was already done in an issue of Archie's Sonic the Hedgehog comic books. (Issue 18, to be exact.) Even the title was the same. Toni, you've gotta think of your own plots. |
 Sakura Masaki 6/12/01 . chapter 1very kawaii! Good job! sakura |
 Dark Strawberry 2/25/01 . chapter 1Cute. But I don't get it? |
 Anonymous 1/24/01 . chapter 1 Loved it! Write more Serena/Darien romance fics. They're my fav couple. |
 LOL 10/22/00 . chapter 1 HA HA HA! LOL! For a while, I though they WERE getting married! |
 reader 8/30/00 . chapter 1 That was a good debut. Keep writing! |
 Anony Miss 8/30/00 . chapter 1 This is so hilarious! Are you *sure* this is ur 1st fic? ;) |