Poor , patient Spock, I can't imagine TOS McCoy being this cruel if he was female in this AU. Perhaps Lenore needs to see a Betazoid shrink or something sabotaging herself because of her ex, letting her ex still have control over her love life without even realising it. But I enjoy the humour in the courtship even if she is being an idiot.

Naw! :3 Never knew Spock could be adorable! . Loved the chapter! Can't wait until the next one! :D

So very glad you updated. I love it. I vote boy. Update soon.

Squee!

boy

Oh my sweet fanfiction goddess; You are truly a master! I loved every single moment of this. Spock talking to the parents was sweet and though I am annoyed with Irma I can kinda see her reasoning. I loved the whole thing with the flower, every single moment I was internally giggling like a school girl and awwing like mad. I definitely would have melted for something so sweet and thoughtful and if that didn't get me I would be proposing marriage myself at the maternity clothing. I mean how more thoughtful and just so gosh darn sweet can Spock get? And then the foot rub! If Lenore doesn't wise up I'll send in fangirls to abduct Spock from her! 3 Speaking of fangirling I loved Jim, Sulu and Scotty being Spock's romantic advisers. It jut gives me warm fuzzies and happy giggles.

I like that all the guys are in on the quest to court Lenore. I could go for a foot massage myself. I don't mind being surprised but I could see Spock wanting to know.

AAAGH! This was fantastic! I was squeeing and biting my lips the whole time. hahaha. I absolutely loved it! I love how Spock didn't really want to go to Jim for help, haha, and then Sulu found out what was happening, and Scotty was nosy and pushed to find out what was happening. I love that they're trying to hook them up. It's perfect. I would think that the baby being a girl would be adorable, just the picture of Spock with his daughter seems absolutely adorable, but either would be fine. I want it to be a surprise!

That was awesome! Thanks so much for the update!

Lenore McCoy, you might as well admit to yourself that you are as good as Spock's. I don't think she can hold out on him much longer.

I'm betting it's a girl.

Again, thanks for the update. I understand your predicament of having to juggle real life with trying to update on here. Hope your next update comes along soon.

Ahhhhh... this was cute :-) Please update again soon. I had forgotten how much I liked this story. :-)

I love this story so much. Your style of writing is incredible; very eloquent with just the right amount of description without being overly gratuitous. Lenore is exactly how I imagined female McCoy to be! I sincerely hope that you haven't abandoned this because I really want to see what happens next! Anxiously awaiting your next update -SE

please update soon! I need to know what happens!

This story is wonderfully written and very, very interesting. I love that you were able to change the characters to fit the storyline, while still keeping them similar to the originals as well as making them realistic. Even the way the characters speak is believable and well done.

The writing itself is also done very well, with little to no mistakes in grammar or spelling, which makes it even more pleasant to read.

The plot is well thought out, original, and engages the reader in the story. This is most difinitely one of the best stories I have read outside published works (even better than some) and I thoroughly enjoy each and every chapter.

Eagerly awaiting an update,

Qwiksylver

When i got to he end i was inwardly squealing, "Nononononono No! There has to more!"

Its wonderful!

Keep it up!

your story is so well written, your writing style is amazing! I love girl bones, she's so feisty haha. Eagerly awaiting your update ellan