This was great,them standing in the rain ,she came out to ask him if things were okay.

I would love for you to take her away for me and the rest of the fans. :) Can't wait for more.

Love this. Will there be more?

I'm a big DMB fan myself, I'm so excited what's the next song you're going to pick for your next chapters. Let You Down is one of my favorite song. Love this chapter too by the way.

Great chapter!