Awwwww...

OMG THIS MADE ME CRY! You are a amazing writer if you could make people cry with your work.

...wait So they both died?

AWWWW! That's terrible! but then again, that's what you get for making a pact with the devil :P Very bittersweet!
:P

Galexia

I started to cry. D':

I really enjoyed the story.

...your update has distracted me from studying for the final exams. :(

Anyway, I read this over again. It was amazing. The emotion and feelings (for a certain 'name') were poured into this piece of writing, that me, and all your readers, feel a piece of your burning passion every time we read your works. Incredibly heart-wrenching and breathtaking. Simply amazing.

...woooot! I'm credited. :) thanks! Continue writing!

Your friend/best-a/pangetbuddy,

WHADDAPACK.

y u no go online! /3. ))

HOY, 'teh. Post the next chapter na. :) Its really good. And you've kept your readers waiting for four months. Don't worry though. I had mine waiting longer. :

By the way, this fic is still as amazing as I first read it months ago. It's well-written, engaging, and filled with drama. :)

Keep on writing. Keep on dreaming. :D

-Koyah *who's too lazy to log in*. )))

this is good but it makes no sense at all...-

Hmmm...a brain tumor. And they're hiding it from him? That won't end well.

That was a real cliffie btw. Will we find out what's wrong with Hunny in the next chapter? I hope so!

I'd call that a mini-cliffie, not a real cliffie, but it fits the story.

I'm actually more curious about what is wrong with Hunny, not what Reiko's going to say.

Hmmm, what happened to Hunny on the stairwell? Is he sick? Becoming diabetic? What?

Now I'm curious.

But I loved Mori's advice. :D

YAY! Someone else made a Hunny/Reiko story! I'm so glad mine isn't the only one now.

Oh, this was very well written by the way. I wonder, what's going on with Hunny? I'm guessing he wasn't just being rude and forgetful, that's not like him.

The drama! The demons! The writing! I'm so happy that of the few HunnyxReiko stories floating around that this is one of them. I read all nine chapters in one sitting, and it kept my attention and kept me guessing.

Oh boy, plot twist. Will Hunny really be saved? What's going to happen next?

Take your time with updates; I know how hard it is with shcoolwork and all. Just keep the quality up, because this story is amazing.

Yessss! I have finally caught up to you! Hahaha.

I like this chapter a lot. (Okay, I like the whole story a lot.) It shows a different side of Reiko (but I can't really say that, since I haven't really watched/read the anime/manga) and I think the first part had a lot of emotion that totally fits the atmosphere of the story.

My only concern is that it lacks a bit description. Not all throughout, I mean. What I mean is that it just it wouldn't been really cool if you were to put a little more dramatic effect when Marbas was appearing. Haha. But you know, it was still awesome without it, and I can't question your awesome writing style, so yeah. :)

I also adore some of the lines. They sound so poetic and full of feelings. Kudos to you for that. (:

I hope to see more, WASABI. Hahahahaha. :p I've finally got an idea for your next chapter, to help cure you of your writer's block. :)

Ooohh, interesting twist :D Demons and evil pacts. Love it xD

I think you wrote the ritual well; the built up to it and her emotions throughout. There could have perhaps been a little more detail about the demon to develop the dark atmosphere more, but it was good.

Great work :) Looking forward to the next chapter :) And sorry for the late review! Happy new year!

Mimi x