This is my first review being as I found this story a few days ago... I really like you style is writing. You are very clear to whom is speaking. I also really like that Jareth and Sarah's relationship is very realistic. Especially Sarah's feelings toward Jareth, I am really anticipating the next chapter!

The song lyrics fit perfect.
Barbed wire? Really?

Loved the little brave goblin.

Thanks for writing.

Wow
that was such an amazing story
it should totally be a movie

where is the next one
please
i know it will be awsome but you left such a cliffhanger
amazing

Another great chapter! To answer your earlier question, I'd read this no matter what the rating. Thanks for posting!

Keep up the great work. _

You knw what you should do? You should make Sarah win all the challenges, all nice and sweet, and THEN, surprise the audience when devil takes Jareth, and forces Sarah to wed her. Happy ends are boring and unhappy are going to stick to reader's mind for a LONG time, I assure you. Anyway I LOVE it :D

Yeah!

Please update I love this

FAV here. And i was waiting for this story to be updated for a half a year.
So this was the past where Jareth changed? o.O it had a very dark tone to it. Almost scary like. But i Like it xD Then you are goin to change it to rated M. I'll be waiting for you to update. xD

THIS STORY IS FAN FREAKING TASTIC! I just started reading last night after a recommendation from my friend and I am overly obssessed with how amazing this is! The plot, the characters and cast, the way it's written I mean its just overall a fantastic story and I can not wait for you to update ! This is by far the most amazing story on this site! You have every little detail and aspect thought up and layed out and the plot and story line it eexpectional! The idea of the movie director and tying that into the devil an his sins who in turn have their own kingdoms! The kingdoms and their civilans are spectacular by the way, even though we have only seen pride lands, the concept was outstanding and I am dying to see the other 6! on top of that the virgin mary trial you created it brilliant! I am so glad that I found this story because this is truely an amazing piece of literature ! I'm so excited for more jarethxsarah and I'm curious to see how 'clone' jareth and Sarah's are involved! Please update as soon as you can, I am a senior getting ready to go to college so I'm stressing about packing and finishing school so I somewhat know how rough it is being busy, but update when you eat the chance because I am in total suspense for this story to continue !
forever faithful smiling sinner

Please update more often. My jaw dropped open when i saw you updte now after all this time. It was once my favourite story

AAAA! is nice to have you back I love your story and is good to know that you will be updating more frequently, I was missing your story and is nice to see that you will continue, :)

Cool, I will wait for ch 13.

ERMEGERD! I love your writing! I hope you update soon!

I was so glad to see you had updated after all that time. Please don't abandon this story!