I don't get it. I know this is written from Haruka's perspective, but why is the entire dialect & tone in the story written to make Haruka sounds as if she's a gangster...Yo, WACK, shit man, etc. On the plus note though, I do think Michiru is f*ck-a-licious!

*blank stare*

oh...my...goodnes... o_O' well, that was...interesting. _ actually, it was kinda funny (in a disturbing way)..so uh, just what were you on when you wrote this? -amiko kun

People scare me sometimes...they really all for Haruka Michiru fics,I love them,but I dont really like when Ruka is talked about like a out the spark or whatever for pretty good,but like I said,people scare me sometimes.

I REALLY liked this...I'm not sure why, but i like the new perspective it gave me of Haruka

Already reviewed on Hamena, but this is so f*cking funny. I had to read it again.

This is a really great story!When I first started reading it I was like'Haruka would never talk like that' but it does fit her!It's really very writing!

Oh man. You had some really great moments in there. I loved the foreshadowing. _

lol. Good ish. ) Definitely OOC but hilariously put together. Loved the street-tinged dialect...yo. peace!