Finally, someones made Cid human!When you described the magick going from Rinoa to Squall and when he was in 'the loving embrace of a sorceress' it all just seemed so,how do I put this,real in a love connected them and in a surreal way you described the link between soul mates. Please write a sequel to this, apart from'In love and War' one I Be.

[...a re-furnished, utterly transformed MD level that NORG had one occupied...]

Er, NORG was in the B! level, not MD. And that *one* should read *once.*

All in all, that was a nice end chapter. The tension is handled very nicely in the first half, and it's obvious that you were having fun with the latter part. An interesting, if short, fic.

Rr. Interesting. Those SeeD regs get interesting at times, don't they? I know I had fun with them on occasion. Pesky things...

I'm being dragged away now, so I can't read the next chapter, but it's still looking good. And now I feel like I have to read Dying of the Light just to see what's going on. I'm a sucker for GF plots...

oops, didn't include my email so here it is :P ... maybe i should just register on the darn site... keep up the excellent writing!

I know it isnt classified as humor, but those last two chapters are just too funny to not be called humor. Sure, it has drama, and its serious, but its just too hard not to laugh along with Cid. Deffinately one of your best!

Cool story... Just curious about a few things thou, will you ever explain the "process" of Squall becoming the sorceresses' knight and will there be continuation of this story's sequal?

Wow, excellent story, can't wait to read the outcome

Oooh...mooore...you write Squall and Rinoa perfectly imo. That little bit of 'fighting' at the end is really cute too.

Such an interesting story, and well-written to boot. A good use of ambiguity, and the imagery fits well. I think you need to share some of this awesome writing talent with me, dangit.

See, at this rate, you're gonna have the best drama FF8 fics out there period...