I feel sorry for April, finding out about the collapse and then blaming it on herself. But you do the characterisation of her beautifully and I look forward to more chapters. :)

Nice chapter, the italics at the start were hurting my eyes though but then again, it is a dream sequence and the italics are symbolizing that. As for Kian, I sort of felt sorry for him, with Vamon there he definetly wasn't going to persuade the six. However...I suppose they still would have condemned Kian with or without Vamon. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter-should be great! :)

I really like your story. TLJ and Dreamfall TLJ are my favorite games and I'm eagerly awaiting closure to the story. (Although it looks like that will be some time). I find your continuation to be very realistic. Hope you update soon.

Awesome chapter, beautiful descriptions...really satisfying storytelling and I'm eager for more! :)

I wonder what the plan is...

Interesting...I look forward to reading more. :)