Hey, what's this? How about an update? ;P Great story! I hope you decide to update this english one ;) I don't know german enough to understand much... or maybe I'll just have to work on that? If only I weren't so hopeless when it comes to german! ;P

;.; poor snaape! NO I CANT THINK THAT WAY SNAPE'S A GIT! uggh you are turning my mind... damn you...

Wow, it's really good. I like how you change the points of views of the two of them. And instead of using words that you hear everyday you use diffrent one, such as heavens instead of sky. Please keep writting it.