OH MY G0D.

This was so heart-breaking! Even though it was quite simplistic in places where I thought it should be more fleshed out, the point where she shot herself made me gasp out loud and go "WTF!", haha.

This was still a very compelling and heart-breaking plot. Great idea!

Absolutely phenomenal! Just like the other reviewer said, Peter would brave the fires of Hell just to save Susan. I think you should continue this and make it a story. Write about how Peter would in fact go through Hell or just have himself be damned!

Well as I said before, love knows no wrongs. I have to admit the ending surprised me. I honestly didn't see that coming. I can't help but think if P/S felt about each other as strongly as that, he would brave the very fires of hell with just a sword in hand to get her back. Awesome story. Hope you write more. Hope you have a Merry Christmas too. Also hope you continue "Fight for Her". Its a great story.

awesome! that's all i've got to say!

i dont like the idea of Su and Peter... but the way u wrote it... was amazing, you made me feel bad about it, even mad at aslan. This was great.