I agree with foundandfree this also needs to be finished.

Ps: it now 3am and I still reading.

Okay, I know that you wrote this a year ago and it is entirely possible that you might've forgotten where you intended to take this story, but won't you please, please come back and finish it? It is beautiful beyond words and I want to see if my suspicions regarding Edmund are correct. I also really want to see how Peter makes everything better and the wonderful, amazing friendship that is Peter and Edmund begins to form. Pretty please?

I love it! Everything just flows effortlessly; all the character turmoil is believeable.

When are you going to update?

Please, please, PLEASE finish it!

It was good, and I would like to know how it ends!

Caity :)

Um... are you going to update?

So beautiful T-T and sad, please write another to this PLEASE like if Peter find out what actually happened or something, omg this is beautiful thank you so much for writing it. You have a wonderful mind _

Continued in this story? I sure hope so!

Update soon!

please update soon :)

Please update ASAP! I'm extremely intruiged!

-Dyslexic Nerd

I'll make you a deal-

I like this story so much, and want to see more of it so much, that the next time you update, I'll will choose one of your multichapters and review each and every single chapter, as well as a review for this story.

Write More!

Nat

Awesome start, I can't wait for more.

Oh poor Edmund! What has he been up to, and why is Peter showing affection causing him such distress? Thanks for sharing this, and I look forward to the next chapter!

this is great please update

*bip*

This story has been added to my community (and faved). Just to let you know.

Such an awesome start! Please turn it into a multi-chaptered fic. I have this piece on Story Alert.