Awww This is complete...? I wish there will be more fluffy Isaac/Ivan fics. Yes I love the idea of an evil Jasmine.

But...So you explained how Robin and Ivan can still be a couple while Robin had a child with Jasmine. But what about Karis...? Just wondering if you made up an explanation for that.

Hm... Most of the characters seem to be in good character. I think it was good how the story was told from Isaac, it's often the hardest thing to do, taking a seme's point of view. Most people just end up with a load of hormones.

For me Ivan was a bit too feminine...He seemed like young Mary. Not quite as motherly as the Mary you wrote but then he didn't really have much of a male presence. A person who didn't know Golden Sun could easily mistaken Ivan as a female.

Always glad to give encouragement to others, it's the least I can do. And thank you for really releasing this before Christmas hope you could finally update some of your OTHER stories now. Though, I'd be thoroughly thrilled to see a lemon for Ivan and Isaac, though Mut and Crown isn't too bad either.

Thanks and Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year!

Poor Isaac! And poor Mut, too! Isaac can't look at him because of her, but then again, he wouldn't be there if it wasn't for her. I'm not too sure if I would want to even hear how Mael cam to be.

Anyway, any chance of this being done by Christmas?

Wait, you have an AFF account? can you tell me the username? Especially if you have fics there not found here or DeviantArt?

Anyway, I certainly like how you're able to add humor seamlessly into the story. And I hope you push through with that X-rated fic, Go ahead and get carried away, just be sure to come back and post it!

YAY! First review! Sorry for not being able to give a review on the first chapter, I got too caught up in a game I just downloaded recently. Anyway, I think the story's been great so far, though you've really got me wondering about Jenna/Jasmine, I wonder what happened. But then again, I'd much rather have Isaac and Ivan in a pairing. Also, was Isaac's child intentionally wrongly shortened? I thought Mathew would end up as 'Mat' rather than 'Mut', I don't particularly like it because he'll be almost as cute as Isaac!, probably even cuter since he's just almost 6. Hope you'd consider making an x-rated fic for Ivan and Isaac, there's not enought to go around!