i love it great stories

HEYY.. IF no one has done it. i would like to do the sequel. :) but i have to finish meh story in progress.

D'aww love it! Please update soon!

awww wally... at least she stopped James right?

Great story, I demand a sequel :-P x

Ep! What hapened! I REEEEEEAALLLLYYY WANT TO KNOW! Please update soon!

Whoa, not Kuki?

Uh ih! I wannt know who it is now! Update soon x

Omg it's James Truman in disguise! But wouldn't that make him gay? Du du du duuu look out it's batman (Wally) and robin (James)! Lol updat soon

Nooo! Wally save her!

update soon x

Lol where'd the quicksand come from haha! Update soon so Wally can forgive for his mistake

Wally: I said I was sorry!

Kuki: whatever...

Oh boy... Update soon!

okay, a little advice, make sentences a little longer. add a few more details. but it's good so far. now, what i think should happen is that they fall asleep in the cave, James Truman comes in the cave and is just about to kill wally because he had his arm rested on her. kuki wakes up, was able to stop james. James says he want her back, she says that he has to be put to rest, they find the body, bury it and he's off their hands for good. wally tries to tell kuki that he loves her, he cuts himself off, and tries to walk away. kuki grabs his hand, pulls him to her, kisses him. ace comes and kidnaps kuki and they have to save her, then James truman comes back from the dead... again, kills Ace, saves kuki and finally rests in peace. happy ending, lalalala

awww sweetm upsate soon :-) x

It was kind of fast paced but other then that it was fine! Update soon!

OMG!. This story is soo scary!. But, I get scared easily . But great story so far. -Nani ]

Sooo cute and fluffy! Do I sense Nigel loves Kuki? Well I noticed that before but I forgot to say so. Well update soon because I hope Jason kills ace! MUAHAHA!