That's sweet of toshiro to do that

Aww Momo is so sweet. To give away the watermelon she worked so hard just like that takes alot of compassion! I luv Momo's kindness! PCE

Awww! So KAWAII! X3

luv it wen its short n sweet

how beautiful you if you have talent for writing, like me, you should have done is give another kiss longer but it is perfect, kisses and hugs

How cute! I like short fluffy stories!

I recognize your style anywhere. Really.

Nice story!

All together...one...two ...three! Awwwwwwwwww! Sugoi and adorable.

I loved it! But now I have a craving for watermelon! XD Awesome story!

I gotta say, I loved this one-shot! It's a sweet birthday for Toshiro...especially how Momo starts fussing over her present she gave away. Watermelon is the perfect present for him behind Momo!

omg, HI! it's been so long i haven't went on fanfiction, i don't know if you remembered me, my old pen name was frozenicecream

gwaah, you're gotten so much better ever since i left bleeh *jealousy* btw great story, loved it 3

im gonna abuse my favorite button and read all of your stories after i finish my exams :3

ooh yay! so adorable! I loved it. Especially how Momo wasp picturing those two scenes. I could just imagine her freaking out.

and obviously Toushirou wouldn't mind. he loves her! XDXD. Besides, I think he liked the present that he got much better than the one he was going to get. XDXD

thanks for the nice oneshot!

Yay! Such a cute story from my favorite author!

I love it! -_-