*smiles* simplicity is perfection. I wish i could write shorts that have this kind of simple yet thoughtful points. someone here definatly seems to have a full grasp of the concept of love. wish for that too... dah well! also i think that tenchi and ryoko are much better suited for each other than tenchi and ayeka, or that sakuya girl for that matter. but not much point in arguuing that. also i'm just willing to guess that blue is your favorite colour, you seem to have memorized the extra large pack of crayolas. :)

And here I be! *hug/glomp*
I have never in my life even found out much about Tenchi Muyo, and so obviously coming into this a felt a little lost...and yet I enjoyed it immensly. The kind of one-shot warm fuzzy feeling fic that I love! :3 The last line was especially nice-"and life went on". I like having an open end, not tying everything up in pretty ribbons; a little bit of chance and change. A bit of reality, but enough of a nudge to know that, hey, it's likly you're gonna get what you want! And if you don't like the couple, well-we didn't tie it up, did we? You can always hope.
*holds up hands* Ten fingers up, because I don't have ten thumbs!

That was awesome. I really liked the way you got into Ryoko's head, and the way she veiws her relationship with Tenchi. Great job.

That was interesting. Might there be a sequel?

- Sora

I think there was a good plot. It was one of those explanation/self insight type fics right? Please tell me if I'm wrong! Actually, don't please. i don't like to be wrong. Ack! Just forget what I said before! Bleh!! I liked it and that's all that matters, right? I don't know why I put all that other stuff in here! I'm just too lazy to highlight and delete it! Don't mind me! ::scampers off::

KAWAII!!!!I like it!!! ^_^

I liek this, it was cute. Now add a plot with this style and you will have a great story. Keep 'em coming

That was kind of funny, there's no plot whatsoever! Heh heh heh. You are a great author, on the other hand. You should write more like these.

cool!