|Reviews for The Reflections in the Past|
| daisesndaffidols 5/23/13 . chapter 77
I believe Gina is in for the surprise of her life... She'll learn that you don't mess with B&B and Team!
| daisesndaffidols 5/23/13 . chapter 76
I don't think I'd want to be Gina when the team finally catches up with her.. She might just disappear and never be heard from again!
| mendenbar 5/14/13 . chapter 76
Didn't advance the plot any but such a lovely introspective from Brennan's POV.
| StayNickJonas 5/14/13 . chapter 76
love this story so far:) hopefully booth will run into Angela or Hodgins ;)
| squintHazel 5/11/13 . chapter 75
Hey hi! I'm just wondering if you're still goin' to continue with this story. I regularly check on updates for this story and it's been while since you've updated. Hope to read the next chapter for this story cause I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck!
| Dudeybob 4/7/13 . chapter 75
I've just finished reading all of this story and I only started it yesterday. I blame you for keeping my up until past 2am reading (not that that is a rare occurrence).
I love how it all fits together, it's not just something that's made up as you go along like some stories I've read, it actually all makes sense (although sometimes people say that about my writing and I have in fact made it up as I go along, but I smile, nod and pretend I planned every part).
I also love how in character everyone is, and how Bones and Booth kinda slowly entered a relationship, starting off my innocently sleeping together, then having sex without labeling it. I think in the show it kinda jumped. We went from years of will they won't they to 'I'm having your baby!' and as wonderful as that was, it was all a bit sudden. It would have helped to see some in between. But anyway, I digress.
I do think you need to address that Booth called Bones heartless. I know he said it in anger and didn't really mean it, but it would sit with her. Ironically, it's something she's very sensitive about, and to have Booth say it about her, the one person who was always meant to see past the coldness and believe that she was a decent person, I think she'd take it to heart. Not to the point it would destroy them, but they definitely need a conversation. If they don't die that is. It always bothered me how they just glossed over Angela calling her cold in the show. I love Brennan and Angela's friendship and I think coming from her best friend, it would have struck a chord.
I think maybe the reason you don't have more reviews is the chapters are very short. For example at the beginning when Caroline was calling everyone, it could all have been merged into one chapter, although I get that you might want to get a little bit up quickly rather than make everyone wait weeks for an update. But that does mean that because you only gave a little each time, it might have put people off at the beginning as it took a while for the story to get going, where as I had all 75 chapters right there, so it didn't bother me as much.
Having said that, now the action has got started, it's not stopping. Hence the late hour of my reading.
Well after that good long ramble, happy writing and I hope to see more soon.
| daisesndaffidols 4/4/13 . chapter 75
I hope that Jumpkin Jack Flash is truly on Hodgins side, and not working with Gina...and I hope that the shadow they saw isn't Booth...
| Guest 4/3/13 . chapter 74
Good news . Magnificent job.
| Guest 4/2/13 . chapter 73
| geraghtyvl 4/1/13 . chapter 73
You're killing me here! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| daisesndaffidols 4/1/13 . chapter 73
Wait..this was the last chapter? We don't get to see B&B rescued, or Gina taken down?
| Mezzo187 3/20/13 . chapter 72
ARGH! I thought it was cruel enough to leave the last chapter where you did-this is even cliff-ier!
But if that homeless guy knows where Gina's 'place' is, they'll get her, and get Brennan in time. This story is showing the truth of how you treat people-treat them well, and it will reflect and rebound well back on you. Esp. if you are kind to those other people dismiss.
| daisesndaffidols 3/20/13 . chapter 72
Why didn't Booth just take a brick and try smashing Brennan's chains? This is too intense! Let them get out of this ok!
| mendenbar 3/20/13 . chapter 72
I sure hope Jack2 is a good guy.
| squintHazel 3/19/13 . chapter 72
Love this story! I am always looking for the next chapter every time. Keep it up!