These are wonderful little stories, self-contained and vivid on their own. Together, they make up a mosiac not unlike circuitry. I see a few typos here and there, but nothing overly jarring. The Sam/Quarra stuff is VERY amusing. Quorra getting overwhelmed by a cheeseburger, and the part where Sam is dealing with a very drunk and high Iso and trying NOT to think with his dick is both funny and noble on his part while also a touch disturbing when you think about how the poor girl's in over her head.

Adding to favorites.

W.O.W. That is really all I can say. This chapter was AMAZING, and moving, and had so much depth, and very nearly had me crying in a public library so, yeah.

WOW.

Nice short stories you've written. So far you've got more off-grid ones than on-grid, but in all, you've got a nice tone to the writing. The first was especially well done-the way you tied it into movie events while simultaneously exploring a very minor tangent about the kind of programs the movie never focused on. Impressive.

I think I had that reaction to an In N Out Burger the first time I had one. LOL The sad truth is now that I live down the street I never eat one.

But damn are they good.

I adore this! :) And I also feel that way about cheeseburgers :D

I also think your characterizations through out these five short chapters, even thought they're brief, really capture Quorra and Sam's characters.

Can't say i like all of these, but chapter 5 was superb. It really evokes the image of CLU trying to make perfection while the ISO's in innocent curiosity, can;t get with the program. (ha, pun!)

This was precious.

Nice work

Much Love,

Santiva Potter

Awesome little ficlets. Can we have one with tron now? Haha

Make more! These are so sweet, and funny. I ship Quorra/Sam, so these are really great.

IN N OUT CHEESBURGER! YOU'RE MY NEW BEST FRIEND!

HAHAHA! The way you protray Quorra in these stories is both correct and hilarious.

Please continue.

Love this alot :D

I like how you portray Quorra. Good job.

More giggles!

Nitpick, though: "their car can next in line" doesn't make sense, I think you meant to say it differently.

Thanks for writing these, I look forward to more!

"Being a forgiving person is all part of being a User."

Oh, if only that were true.

Thanks for making me laugh! I may be with Quorra on this one.