Loved it! Very nice...

i like it!

i'd love to see this developed further if you decide to. these characters hold some much emotion... it'd be great to see you expand even more than you have...

So far your story is exelent. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Jay

it's lasto beth nin, tolo dan na ngalad, hear my voice, come back to the light

that was such a nice birthday present, thaaaanks! :) and you even put frodo in it, sigh, all for me?

i'm so happy! :D *jumps around hugging her little pikachu*

*sigh*, and even though i have no idea how f1 could inspire you to that 4th part i enjoyed reading more. did you go watch deep impact already? you'll write more frodo stories... watch out, it's infectious i think ;)

hdgdl,

your pika

You are great!

Keep on writting.

That was brilliant! Seriously, loved it! Especially the last chapter, it was so sweet ;_;. Would love to see this idea developed further, I'll keep an eye out for more of your writing!

interesting...