| Reviews for Mount Rancour |
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quasifictionalist 7/22/11 . chapter 11Wow, what a phenomenal chapter! So many deaths. I loved the twist in this chapter, and I was certainly wrong in who I thought the killer was as they ended up dying. Lost two of my favorite characters in this chapter, but it's OK since all of the characters at this point are enjoyable to read about. Please update soon! |
quasifictionalist 7/18/11 . chapter 10LOL when Yvette couldn't remember Lois' name! I think I might have a killer pegged. Great chapter with lots of running around. |
quasifictionalist 7/14/11 . chapter 9Wow, I was mentioned in this chapter! As you can probably tell, I do not set aside nearly enough time to read or write, but I should be caught up completely on your story before the end of the weekend. Another great chapter. Definitely did not figure the first death to happen. That one was very surprising. I also liked the tunnels in this chapter. Such a great way to split people up. |
quasifictionalist 7/14/11 . chapter 8LOL... I was so in suspense wondering who was going to die at the end of the chapter... I suspected Yvette or Nick or even Ben. But then no one died... Well played. Certainly love all of the running around. And of course the mass carnage. |
quasifictionalist 7/12/11 . chapter 7Another fun chapter! I'm happy you killed off that person, because the guests were getting a bit too organized. I also love how all of the characters are reacting to everything, and that the story lines of the town's people are continuing. I'm anxious to see how they will fit into the following chapters. |
quasifictionalist 7/8/11 . chapter 6Wow. A lot happens in this chapter. Very exciting. |
quasifictionalist 7/8/11 . chapter 5I definitely thought someone else was going to get it at the end of this chapter. Still rooting for Chris to end up with Gloria. |
quasifictionalist 7/7/11 . chapter 4Awesome turn with the bacon! It seems really unsafe to be a townie right now. Sorry it has taken me a while to R&R. As you can probably tell with the pace of updates with my story, I have not had much time. Thanks for the great story so far! |
quasifictionalist 5/5/11 . chapter 3Another great chapter. I like the love triangle that is forming between Chris, Yvette, and Gloria. I hope Chris and Gloria end up together. Awesome death in this chapter. Very gruesome. |
quasifictionalist 5/1/11 . chapter 2Sorry I haven't kept up well with this story. Really liked this chapter. I was surprised by the deaths in this chapter, as I assumed those characters would last longer :) I'm beginning to suspect Nick a bit. |
quasifictionalist 12/25/10 . chapter 1Great start to the story. This is the first of your stories I've had a chance to read, and it is excellent. My favorite characters so far are Yvette, Gloria, Chris, Jocelyn, Selina, and Walter. I really love the subplots your establishing and the location. The deaths were great. Hope you update soon. |