This was very cute.

I love it!! Pleases pleases write more soon!!

I really enjoyed this. It had lots of great moments between the two of them, and felt very real. I loved how much they argue, it fits them better than some mushy alternative. I am walking away with a wonderful mental image of Vash grinning at a scowling Meryl. It makes me giggle. Not sure how I feel about where it ends. I can see that it is supposed to be left open, and the problem of Vash’s feelings is resolved but at the same time I need more. Then again, maybe I just want more. I always want that from a good fic…

Amazing fic! Wai it's so awesome! x3 I'm all giddy now haha xD

I really enjoyed this. It was a very real, emotional, and all around great fic. Nice job!

I thought that this was great! Not only was it sweet and had wonderfully illustrated emotion, but it explored the characters personalities really well!

(( I hope this was not posted twice. ^^; ))

I thought that this was great! Not only was it sweet and had wonderfully illustrated emotion, but it explored the characters personalities really well!

that was off tha hook! i kno u'll probably never see this review but this, honestly, was one of the BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ! it's so cute and adorable and... omigod, i can't even explain how much i love it. if i was a writer 4 fanfiction, i'd TOTALLY put u on my favorites list! holla!

::melts into puddle now::

That made me feel so happy at the end. It may sound silly or even disgustingly cliche, but it really did give me the warm fuzzies. Meryl and Vash never really get moments with each other, from what I've seen, and it almost seems that they should. So it's nice to see a very well-written Vash and Meryl fic that gives them what the fangirls think they deserve. I'llshuttupnow. *hearts*

(I'm a bit late...)

Even though this is a romance, and in a fandom I know very little about, I still loved it. That says something about your writing ability, doesn't it?

The way Meryl and Vash's thoughts went... perfect. What little I know of Vash's character seemed perfectly right in this fic, not to mention that the ending made me really smile. I don't enjoy romance in fics, usually, but this was good. Relly good.

Take care, deleria. I'm gonna have to read more of your fics once I know a bit more about Trigun...


Rev.

Ignore that last comment.

You dork! Where's my kiss!?

lol! C'mon! Egads, woman! You can't set it up like that, and then leave it hanging! Either make him altruistic, self-sacrificing, and capable of cutting the romantic ties...

Or end their conversation with some sort of resolve! If he finally admits to himself that he wants to be with her, then the readers should know - is he going to act on that? Or are there still conflicting needs with his wants? Like the need to keep her at a distance?

Aside from the CLIFFHANGER - bah! - their dialogue was absolutely wonderful. I enjoyed reading all of it. And darn you, now I gotta go work on my K/M fic. :) You are the guru of Trigun. You really are. I'm glad you'll be there to beta my chapters.

MAN, his reaction is so altruistic. And valid! You orchestrated it all so well. The introspection is just...aah! I'm eating it up!!

Crap. There you go again, making me put Humpty Dumpty on the back burner. Darn you, deleria!!

The tension in this is SO thick. Gotta get to the next chapter. And don't worry. I'm not expecting a kiss, so you won't get flamed if there is no happy-ending mackage going on. Vash has too many valid reasons to keep their relationship platonic. If he truly cares about her, how could he endanger her?

That I get. I respect it. Now! Onto the conversation!

Awesome lyrics for this fic.

You know, when it comes to romance, I have a thousand pet peeves...and you didn't cross a single one of them in this chapter!!

I ate it up!! Again, all very natural. You are quite thoroughly tapped into the Trigun universe, my friend.

What a great way to start it, too. The dialogue hooked me immediately. They really dumb Meryl down in the anime, don't they? Make her shallow, huh? This must be the manga Meryl. I like her much better. :)

Hey Del!!

I'm afraid I don't know anything about Trigun, so I can't comment on whether characters were kept in character or whatever.

HOWEVER, I can say that this was EXTREMELY well written. I envy your ability to write dialogue... everything flowed so smoothly and naturally, it was like watching a scene in real life rather than reading it. Everything flowed wonderfully, for that matter. My attention was caught by the lyrics at the beginning, and I was hooked all the way to the end of the chapter.

All in all, great work. Loved the descriptions of Vash's reactions to Meryl's declaration, and the scene in which he pushed her away was so well done, I wanted to strangle the nincompoop myself. It was very convincing and realistic, and EFFORTLESS. I don't know how you do it.

Anyway, I wish I could write more, but computer time is HORRIBLY limited.

Great fic, see ya on VALL!!

~Mira