oh, so beautiful.

I used to thought I'd never see the day when I'd _like_ this pairing, but now I'm glad your writing opened my to the idea (eh, every rule has it's shining exceptions ;P). The way you put it, it really makes sense.

Besides, the writing style not only descriptive, but also evocative and effective, it really put you in the character's shoes.

I'm a bit sad you seem not to be writing in this fandom at the moment (possibly not anymore :(?), but I'm glad you shared such a tale as this.

*claps hands*

I remember reading this story on and I really liked it a lot.

*scribbles down notes* Must . . . learn . . . to write . . . as well as Meredith. *dies* How on Earth am I going to do that?

So anyway . . . so creative! I love how Cosmos is referred to as the Lady of the House, adding to her mystery and charm. Something about how you write lends itself to the rearder so that she or he can almost feel what the characters do. Very effective writing and splendid characterization.

She had Demando's babies! *drools* Okay, I'm better now.

WOW... That was great! And it was... _right_ somehow. The ending-it was _right_. SO good!

I do so love this story. . And the one that came before it. It is just a strange, yet wonderful spin on the Nemesis story-line.

WOW, This is excellent. I wished I could write like this... Usagi isn't my fave character. I probably would have to support on Setsuna/Diamond pairing though. I do have to agree as Usagi being the main star.