These drabbles make me smile. X'D I like your writing style and there's nothin' better than a violent Shizzy-chan to brighten up your Wednesday morning.
Oh, how I know this terrible, terrible feeling when you know people like the stuff you write but are too lazy to get up and write something. So.
ANYWAY, to your story. I think it is no bad, no, you're style is straight-forward. You could go a bit more into detail, but this way is fine, too - better than all these guys who write site by site about the feelings and then something happens and you're just like "Hu? What? When was that?" But, at least the second chapter could be a little bit longer. It was kinda confusing that as soon as I opened it I could already read your AC at the end... Yeah.
(Hope you understand me, my english is crappy and it's laaaate in the night.)