I wondered that good fiction to tell a little after the end of the novel

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Awesome read! Love the flow of every word.

This story is so original, and touching.

This story was awesome! You obviously followed the series well and wrapped it all up nicely. Love it!

Awwww , so cute!

Great recap and a lemon to boot! Thanks for this. I like the way they come together as a team, so to speak.

Poor Sousuke. Being caught between two women, and having to really choose between them, couldn't have been easy at all. I know why he hesitated to save Nami, and she did, too, so it was nice that she resonated with Kaname and told her to forgive Sousuke, and that she did, too. Hmm. After all he's been through, it will be amazing if he can ever really and truly let go of all those battles and deaths that he witnessed and took part in, and just be normal. Does he know what normal is? I guess so, after having seen Kaname living a life he hasn't been able to understand.

Very good emotion.

Very nice chapter. So they've graduated and can move on with their lives...if they let each other. It seems Kaname will have the harder time of it, since she isn't sure this new version of Sousuke is one she can trust. Interesting.

It was nice to read of two; who have never been with anyone else, with each other. What made it even better is knowing how much in love they are with each other and that this is a new beginning for them. This was very tastfully written; where you still left a little to the imagination, making this just wonderful. Great job KSF!

I can't believe what these two have been through. I'm glad that Kaname and Sousuke talked this out like they did; holding nothing back. Every reason they did anything is now known to the other. I loved the end of the chapter as Kaname again realized how hard Sousuke fought to find her, but that he still felt inadequate. I'm looking forward to seeing her prove that he is far from inadequte. I can see the hard work you put into this chapter. Excellent job!

I'm glad that Sousuke was able to explain everything he had been through without Kanama interrupting him. She listened to everything he said, even when it was hard hearing about Nami. He explained everything quite well though. I liked how this ended with Kanama thanking Sousuke for keeping his promises. Nice job.

I wish I was more familiar with this anime, but just reading this first chapter alone makes me want to read more. Sounds like their talk is going to be quite serious. I can also see that each thinks the other changed alot, I'm guessing because of what they have been through. As always, your fantastic writing makes me clearly see things. Kaname and Souske are crazy about each no doubt. As soon as I get my next chance, I'm heading to the next chapter. Great writing!

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Woah xD

Awesome job! You should make a sequal! Now that would be even cooler (if that's possible that is [;)

Love it! looking forward to reading the rest of it! I've been searching for a story that continued from the amazing ending to the manga, and yours is the best one I found- And I know only from the first chapter! Your style of writing is very nice, its entertaining and flows real well! Thanks so much for this!

I'm at a bit of a loss for words here. It was that good. I kinda thought that they would wait there at that one point, but things changed in a hurry there. The citrus portion was very tastefully done and afterword it was nice to see afterward that Souskue was still being the guy we know by planning their future together like one would for a mission.