aaah!

LOVE IT!

i loooved it but pleasEEE do another one shot for this one!

I really like this please continue...

Oh my gosh. This story was great but in a sad way.

Can you PLEASE make a sequel?

If not, can you make this story in Troy's POV?

I wanna know what he felt about this and what he might have done while Gabriella was out.

AWESOME STORY! ) Keep up the GREAT work!

um wow... how sad. Just like their real relationship! :'( ahhhhhhhhhhhh I'm so sad.

Can't help but think that this oneshot was sort of um pointless? Like there was no story sequence, just a detail of Gabriella's day... Peace.

Pam

P.S. Zac and Vanessa haven't confirmed or denied the rumors so there's hope. And objectively, it would be a really really bad idea to do a hsm sequel (butI do wanna see zanessa babies).

incredibly written. you have talent and ive been checking every sunday for the past month hoping to see something(: it made my day when i saw a new story! though it was incredibly written i hate how it ended, haha prolly the last thing i needed around the holidays, especially new years. i think you should defiantly whip up a quick second chapter two shot of them getting together for new years:) you would honestly make my life because this one shot was so sad

To close to what proabaly actually happened lol

hopefully it really isnt over with them !

No part 2? :(

Haha. Welcome back btw. Happy Holiday!

I loved this story! The ending was perfect, I didn't expect that kind of an ending! Great story.

OMG, talk about depressing. Your story was well written but

my heart couldn't take this right now. I know that Troy and Gabriella at least can have a happy ending and this was too real.

This story should seriously be published! It was so good; it was sad, but extremely well-written.

I loved how at the end, you wrote, "She wondered if he meant it in more than one way." That makes a good ending because it doesn't make anything definite and it got me thinking about whether or not Troy did mean that he was not only finished painting. I really enjoy stories that have something to think about at the end.

Another thing I loved was that you kept mentioning all the things Gabriella did because Troy liked it. For example, the cookies-the one kind was his first favorite, the next his second, and the next his twenty-third. And then the fact that the rooms were painted in the colors that reminded Gabriella of Troy and also that she bought the red couch because red was one of the colors of East High, and that was the high school that she had gone to with Troy.

I'm glad Gabriella didn't follow the advice Shrpay gave her on the phone about dressing up and going out. I don't think she would've had a reasonable explaination for going out all dressed up unless she would've said she was going out with someone, which would probably make Troy think she was trying to get back at him and would ruin the whole mood of the story because there would probably have been some sort of argument.

I have another thing I wonder about, too: what did Troy do while Gabriella was gone? I mean, he was alone in his ex-gilfriend's house, and something makes me think that he looked around after he was done painting, since it would only be natural for him to be curious about what the rest of her house looked like since he had to have figured out why she bought the red couch and wanted the living room painted blue.

Anyway, this was a great, but sad story. I'll be looking forward to your next one whenever you finish it and get it posted. Merry Christmas!

are you kidding me?

thats the end? For real?