Well you need to learn how to spell (if you'd like some examples: dispendable is not a word {you probably got mixed up between expendable and disposed}, character at the beginning is spelled wrong as well as continuation at the end, and I think Marcus is spelled with a C but I'm not sure about that one). But other than that, it wasn't bad. This is almost how I see a romance developing between them.

Thunder

Write more that was so amazing and there is not enough elephant princess fanficton as good as this. Personally I liked the cheesy ending.

love this couple! It would be amazing if you could write more!

LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON :D please? I know this is 2012 and you wrote this story in 2010 but it would make my day :) I'll be checking!

I just had a flash of Wesley and Buttercup's relationship. Was that your intent? :)

Plz continue. Cheesy but that's what makes it cute!

i loved this story you should continue on with it. i loved it was amazing

I loved this story. The ending was great and suspenseful and I definatly think you should continue to go on with the story. I loved it and I can not wait to read more you are a gifted writer

I demand a lemon! lol

Aaaaw that was so so so cuute!

Do keep writin!

Awwwww...that was not only cheesy but cute! I love this pairing and I would love to read more!

A lovely little one-shot! Keep going:)

Always loved these two as a couple, as for them lemon... I say go for it , it'll be the first one in this category, i'm sure.

AWWWWWWWWWWW! :) Even if it's really cheesy, it's just so darn cute! Please continue :)

I love this! Lemony continuation sounds AWSOME!

Aww! I just got into this show and I love your fluffed fanfiction so cliche but all the sweetness we readers really want at the end of the day! Great job it's a fave!

P.s: This is Abigail Fond; I remembered your author name from when you reviewed my World of Quest fanfiction! ;D