Listen. I'm getting sick and tired of writers saying their work sucks-especially when it doesn't. Do you expect people to take pity upon you and read if it says it sucks? I usually give fics a pass when their summary tells me it sucks, but I read your fic on a lark, and it's GOOD. So STOP telling folks that your fic sucks! More people will read it! Got it? GOOD. And good luck. _

uh, good job. Kinda dark and stuff but still an excellent story. Ranma's alter ego kinda wavers from being really mean to kinda nice. i dunno, you should definately update. :D

Good chapter but confusing.

Please continue. It is good so far.

Akume doesn't seem that bright. Ranma almost

managed to kill himself for what had already

occured. The latest event will definately add

fuel to that fire. So is Akume just seeking his

own death?

LOL! You need prozac! Lots of it too!

Now where did I put my daily dose . . .

The story is great!

oooo its evil...I LOVE IT! muahahaha...

well, let me think...I LIKE! i think thi is a story idea that has potential, don't listen to those philistines, they don't know anything.

i enjoyed it and i think its about time akane got what she had coming in the end... oh my god i can't believe i wrote that... anyways *-;

i look forward to reading more of this story so keep heart.

That was...disturbing, and yes, it is me, Ax. The anal thing...bleh. Nasty. Anyway, um, later and such.

Yeah um, too much porn, boring, and... Stuff like that.

Lol it's awesome man! See ya in Waterdeep!

This is for those who think that I will rewrite this story, BUG OFF! This story is not written for you! It was written because it had to be wirtten! It was written for me, by me, and only me! I am letting you gain an insight to mine and Ranma's mind. Like I said, this Idea popped into my head. What I did not say was that it continued to nag at me for countless hours, when I was asleep, awake, in school, etc. This is not going to be rewritten for anyone except myself (Spelling errors, scenes added {Still need help with the Kasumi and Tofu scene. Anyone can help.})

It's not an "Evil Ranma" anyway... Akume is a completely different person from Ranma. They just happen to share the same body. Multiple personalities and that kind of crap. I called them Father and Son for symbolism, if no one had found that out yet...

Hell... I'll get going now so that you can have a good day. But, it just goes to show you. Not all things are what they seem... Part II is comng soon, but I'm not sure what to call it... "Someone Fucked Up!" sounded good to me when I put it on, but now...

Oh well... Ja ne, from The Original Lai Lai Boy

Scarily enough, I actually *like* this story.

A lot. The whole "evil Ranma" story idea suffered from there never being any 'good' counterpart. This fic manages to be both waffy and dark at the same time. Weird, yet strangely good. As Kuno would probably say "I await more!"

Nice, but I felt that giving Kasumi and Akane split personalities as well was a bit much.