this was brilliant. I always wondered when Lily found out about all of this. This is a different take on it than most things I've read, but I like it. It would be very like Remus to not want to tell Lily though she probably had it figured out long before. Great job :)

Very nicely written and a different take on Lily and Remus discussing his lycanthropy. Loved Lily's musings on the Marauders. :) Great work!

I would have favorited this story again if it would let me. :)

I'm rereading things I have put on my favorite stories list (well, the Harry Potter portion of it), and I'll admit, I think this is still among the top of my favorites list... I adore Remus, and the end always makes me smile. I can just imagine a hormonal Lily going off on James (though only in jest, for the most part). Very well done.

This is beautiful, great one-shot! You wrote it really well :) Post a sequel? please?

Very good james is in some serious trouble. i think that would be one of the things you should tell a person before you get married.

That was just beautiful. You have a gift.

Aw that was great!

If I had anyway at all to expand on what neonorne said, I would, but I can so imbjuat globulin have to settle for 'ditto'

Sherbetgirl :)

This was beautiful. I've always thought Lily would have known sooner, both about the werewolf and the animagi. But you wrote this so convincingly I had no problems buying into your take of things. Well done.

You write well, your language flows so easily and I can really see the situations and the people you describe. The interactions between James and Lily and Remus and Lily felt very natural.

I have only a few nitpicks, to do with language. A couple of times you repeat yourself in a way that feels a bit clumsy. For instance, you say: "that the boys truly put an effort into caring for him, and there was never a single flaw in their care for him" That's caring for him and care for him twice in a single sentence. I don't think you need the first instance - you could write it something like this: "that the boys truly put in an effort and there was never a single flaw in their care for him"

Juat my suggestion of course. But you write so well these few clunky sentences stand out in a bad way. Also, it's ludicrous, not ludacris.

EPPPP minor cliff hanger at the end, please update soon! was it meant to be a one-shot? either way you should expand on it...