| Reviews for Fang: The Black Hawk |
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Feather Tipped 3/29/13 . chapter 42I KNEW Nudge's baby would be a boy! I KNEEEEWWWW it! Betcha Indi and Chase will fall in love :3 3 |
Feather Tipped 3/29/13 . chapter 37So unexpected... STILL LOVE IT! 3 keep writing! |
Feather Tipped 3/27/13 . chapter 30So I can describe my character for you some more. Her name isn't Madison (that's my real name)- it's Enixe (Cool right?). Like I said, she has short and straight blond hair, blueish-greenish eyes, and light skin. Not as light as Iggy's, though. She's very brave, is scarred from being tested on in the School, and is a great singer. Like the flock, she can see very well in the dark, heals quickly, is very fast, very strong, and has very good reflexes. If she isn't allowed to have wings (*sniff*), that's fine. If she is allowed to be a Pheonix-human hybrid, she'd have beautiful orange, red, and yellow wings like Pheonix's. If she can't have wings, could she be a cheeta-human hybrid? Meaning she's super fast and has dark eyes and blond hair with brown highlights. She'd be super fast and have great reflexes. Hope you accept Enixe - Though I'd prefer the Pheonix-human hybrid, either would be awesome for you to include. Thanks! |
Feather Tipped 3/27/13 . chapter 29Noooo XC You're messing with my feels... |
Feather Tipped 3/27/13 . chapter 26AWWWWW it's too late for me to be a mutant, isn't it? :'( Darn it. Could you write a short fan fiction with me in it as a Phoenix-human hybrid? I'm guessing no since I'd have wings but... Please? I'll describe myself and my wings. I have short, straight blond hair and blueish-greenish eyes. My wings are red and orange, kind of like Pheonix's. Could you do that? Oh, my God, that would be amazing! By the way, I LOOOOVE this story! Keep up the good work! -Madison |
Guest 12/13/12 . chapter 41 best chapter ever...it was just so sweet...i swear i was smiling the whole time |
Guest 12/13/12 . chapter 39 yes to the wedding...totally! |
allieholcomb 12/12/12 . chapter 33what is a bolt, i thought cross bows used arrows |
allieholcomb 12/12/12 . chapter 23Louis and Ella rock they should be like louia or something or ellis |
allieholcomb 12/11/12 . chapter 19i cant wait till they tell everyone about nudges pregnancy |
allieholcomb 12/11/12 . chapter 18I CAN'T BELIEVE MARGRET IS NUDGE'S MOM! |
allieholcomb 12/11/12 . chapter 15Nikol, Erin, Renee, Delaine, Kent, Garfield, Edward girl boy |
allieholcomb 12/10/12 . chapter 11who's margret...oh yeah the lady from the shop |
allieholcomb 12/10/12 . chapter 10it always bugs me when someone goes missing, but half the flock... well at least Fax and Niggy are together |
Guest 11/28/12 . chapter 19 I've just started to read your stories and love them. Just read chapter 19 and love your ref to World Vision! |