Reviews for Fang: The Black Hawk
Feather Tipped 3/29/13 . chapter 42
I KNEW Nudge's baby would be a boy! I KNEEEEWWWW it! Betcha Indi and Chase will fall in love :3 3
Feather Tipped 3/29/13 . chapter 37
So unexpected... STILL LOVE IT! 3 keep writing!
Feather Tipped 3/27/13 . chapter 30
So I can describe my character for you some more. Her name isn't Madison (that's my real name)- it's Enixe (Cool right?). Like I said, she has short and straight blond hair, blueish-greenish eyes, and light skin. Not as light as Iggy's, though. She's very brave, is scarred from being tested on in the School, and is a great singer. Like the flock, she can see very well in the dark, heals quickly, is very fast, very strong, and has very good reflexes. If she isn't allowed to have wings (*sniff*), that's fine. If she is allowed to be a Pheonix-human hybrid, she'd have beautiful orange, red, and yellow wings like Pheonix's.
If she can't have wings, could she be a cheeta-human hybrid? Meaning she's super fast and has dark eyes and blond hair with brown highlights. She'd be super fast and have great reflexes.
Hope you accept Enixe - Though I'd prefer the Pheonix-human hybrid, either would be awesome for you to include. Thanks!
Feather Tipped 3/27/13 . chapter 29
Noooo XC
You're messing with my feels...
Feather Tipped 3/27/13 . chapter 26
AWWWWW it's too late for me to be a mutant, isn't it? :'( Darn it.
Could you write a short fan fiction with me in it as a Phoenix-human hybrid? I'm guessing no since I'd have wings but... Please?
I'll describe myself and my wings. I have short, straight blond hair and blueish-greenish eyes. My wings are red and orange, kind of like Pheonix's.
Could you do that? Oh, my God, that would be amazing!
By the way, I LOOOOVE this story! Keep up the good work!

-Madison
Guest 12/13/12 . chapter 41
best chapter ever...it was just so sweet...i swear i was smiling the whole time
Guest 12/13/12 . chapter 39
yes to the wedding...totally!
allieholcomb 12/12/12 . chapter 33
what is a bolt, i thought cross bows used arrows
allieholcomb 12/12/12 . chapter 23
Louis and Ella rock they should be like louia or something or ellis
allieholcomb 12/11/12 . chapter 19
i cant wait till they tell everyone about nudges pregnancy
allieholcomb 12/11/12 . chapter 18
I CAN'T BELIEVE MARGRET IS NUDGE'S MOM!
allieholcomb 12/11/12 . chapter 15
Nikol, Erin, Renee, Delaine, Kent, Garfield, Edward
girl boy
allieholcomb 12/10/12 . chapter 11
who's margret...oh yeah the lady from the shop
allieholcomb 12/10/12 . chapter 10
it always bugs me when someone goes missing, but half the flock... well at least Fax and Niggy are together
Guest 11/28/12 . chapter 19
I've just started to read your stories and love them. Just read chapter 19 and love your ref to World Vision!
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