|Reviews for That Moment of Silence Before Everything Moves|
| annea101 4/11/13 . chapter 2
nooo dont! you have readers. i repeat you have readers. ''ahem'' anyways cannot wait for more.
| SuperSonicSpeed 10/15/12 . chapter 1
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! This is great!
| GermanyFan 6/18/12 . chapter 2
this is an awesome story cant wait for next chapter!
| SaintCarabas 6/9/12 . chapter 2
Well, I't... good. :3
| TatlTails 3/10/12 . chapter 2
I will review you so you will make more chapters. This is really well written. I love, LOVE vulnerable, memoryless Sonic. It's just amazing how you could give him such a troubled and fearful past, and make it BELIEVABLE! Please don't abandon! I want more of Sonic's memories, and personality traits formerly pushed deep into his psyche.
| HedgeLuver37 2/13/12 . chapter 2
This fanfic is so amazing! I hope you update soon.
| Guest 12/11/11 . chapter 2
| Guest 12/11/11 . chapter 2
| randomreader 10/10/11 . chapter 2
First of all congrats on making a good story.
chapter one when sonic is explaining his fear of water.
The long description is slightly akward and in this situation of a timid hedgehog it does not quite fit. In my opinion it makes the reader feel uncomfortable.
my suggestion is that instead of having Sonic rambling you get to the point like this:
"Well, I think I have a fear of water.I tend to freeze up around it"
It's not perfect but it is something. You could add the part after it if you want about showing his true feelings he'll survive part. This is just a suggestion.
| ChaoCream 9/6/11 . chapter 2
I love it! Amnesia/mind control fanfics have always intrigued me! I really hope you update this sometime.
Um... I feel kind of bad for reviewing so many things in such a short time. You haven't really updated some of the stuff I reviewed either. I don't want to feel like I'm beating on a dead horse or something. I really do love the ideas you have though. .
| WybiE'z KidNapPer 8/27/11 . chapter 2
Gah! How dare there be only 2 chapters when my mind is aching to read more... (hint hint)
| nonamereader 6/7/11 . chapter 2
I love your story! I like your idea of a scared sonic! he sounds so cute! I read it over and over again! I really want you to continue! I want to figure out the rest of the story! You ended on such a cliffhanger! So please continue quickly!
| SonamyFureva13 4/9/11 . chapter 2
Yes, I'm sorta cheating by making this an anonymous review with my pen-name, but who cares?
The purpose behind this review is to get you to pretty please write another chappie... Please? With Shadzy on top?
| ZehHyperactiveAuthor 2/4/11 . chapter 2
OHMIGOSH, THISISSOTOTALLYCOOL! I LOVE how Sonic is all afraid of everything! And I really hope that Eggman will warm up to him and visa-versa! I love how he's learnig about his Ex-adversary! Only...I love the nervousness and all; tis a GREAT idea! I just hope he isn't always going to stutter. It's understandable that he would at first, but I want him to be scared with a natural tendency to hide it, and not pathetic, if you know what I mean. Whatever, it's your story and I'm sure it will turn out great! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE! Happy Writing! _
| ZehHyperactiveAuthor 2/4/11 . chapter 1
OOOOOOHHHHH MYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOSHHH! I totally LOVE your explination for Sonic's sense of humor! TOTALLY AGREE! Now, must...Read...