Despite the dark subject matter, I loved this on deviantart and I love it here too. The progression of the story and its events were very well done and that last line...

"...I was your first enemy."

...was quite awesome. I always imagine the 'screen'(like a movie screen) going black right before a gunshot fires after that moment. Well done.

Please write more stories! Your art is amazing as well! Happy Holidays!

I've read this on deviantart, and I still think it's a really really good story, very shocking, and surprising. It really is a very good fanfic