|Reviews for Substance of Things Unseen|
| aburameclanhead 11/12/12 . chapter 1
This is really good!
| Rosethorn 3/21/11 . chapter 1
You should continue. It's a great beginning
| Matyrfae 12/23/10 . chapter 1
Religion, while I respect it...always makes me a tad uncomfortable...maybe it's cause I've had sermons shoved down my throat too often...or because I'm not very religious myself...but this fanfic...it made me feel good, not nervous that you went there. Well done, you've written this beautifully, and I'm adding this to my favorites. :)
| Ryoko Metallium 12/23/10 . chapter 1
I find these meaningful talks between Thane and Shepard to be the most enjoyable. I love read them, especially when the author manages to handle the dialouge between the two characters so well like you did. Love reading this!
| silentstephi 12/23/10 . chapter 1
Glad you went there. It was a good story. Bravo for having Thane there. .
| Selkit 12/23/10 . chapter 1
Thank you for writing this! I really enjoyed it. As a Christian myself, I love seeing stories about religious Shepards struggling with the spiritual aspects of their resurrections. I especially liked Thane's role in this fic; it was very apropos.
| reconnoiterer 12/23/10 . chapter 1
Very well written fic! I really like how you've used Thane's perspective instead of having it only from Shepard's. I must admit though, I can't help but liking the line about Zaeed being as subtle as a construction saw the best haha
| the orlesian maid 12/23/10 . chapter 1
You captured their essence perfectly! I love this.