|Reviews for and darling, you're just there for decoration|
| exploding-empires 10/5/11 . chapter 1
I loved this so much! :)
| dom the pretended 1/2/11 . chapter 1
BOOOOOOOTIFUL. REALLY GREAT JOB U R AWESOME
| thecivilunrest 12/25/10 . chapter 2
Gah, this was just so absolutely fantastically amazing, ahaha. Merry Christmas to you again too! You have no idea how shocked I was when I saw that you added another chapter. And then I read it and it was awesome. :D
You write Dominique/Lysander very, very well. So you should totally write them more often. (And I'm not just saying that because I love them... which I do, but that's a totally different story, ahaha.)
I must reply to that PM and to your review! Gah, I'm being such a bad fanfiction friend. :P
| Starlight1746 12/25/10 . chapter 2
I'm ver sorry for not reviewing before. I made a mental note "come back to this story" and forgot about it completely. I think its really good, and I absolutely love when someone takes a person u kno nothing about and make a fanfic about them. Am I missing sumthing? Because there's all these fics about Dominique and Lysander. I never understood that... I think you're really good.
| claraoswalds 12/24/10 . chapter 2
You really have a knack for heartbreaking Dominique/Lysander, you know that? D I am still not a fan, because I ship them with other people, but the way you explore their relationship and how lovely it is in this fic is really, really wonderful! Gosh, that last line was lovely and tragic and they need their happy ending, like, yesterday XD Even though I don't ship them...But I always like seeing the NextGen happy D
So, anyway, fantastic job, as always, and keep writing!
| claraoswalds 12/24/10 . chapter 1
This is such a gorgeous freeverse, I'm not even kidding. While I'm not a big fan of Dominique/Lysander, personally, this was absolutely beautiful. How you started with her being strong and pretty and then broken down but still loving Lysander was just amazing. The descriptions and the formatting and the two heartbreaking pieces of dialogue were just perfect. I have this alternate canon in my head where she goes to Beauxbatons XD so I was actually pretty happy about that, even if you did have me feeling horrible for poor Ly (
But they'll get their happy ending, right? D: I'm gonna console myself and say they will because of that last stanza P
The only thing that jumped out at me was this: 'blue eyes dull to cloudydarkdull shades of gray' because you use the word 'dull' twice and it seems a bit repetitive. If you take out the cloudy and dark, it becomes 'blue eyes dull to dull shades of gray', which just sounds weird /
But that was a minor thing. I still loved this freeverse, and how you managed to make me root for a ship I don't even support is beyond me P
But, wonderful job, and keep writing!
| thecivilunrest 12/23/10 . chapter 1
Thank you SOSOSOSO MUCH! I can't even tell you how much I love this because I really, really do. Gah, BEAUTIFUL. You really don't give yourself enough credit when it comes to freeverse, because really, this was lovely! Thanks for such a lovely Christmas present, it might be the best one that I've gotten! (So far, anyway. It'll be the best one that I've gotten on the internet, that's for sure.)
But YAY! You wrote Dominique/Lysander! -dances-
I loved how you described Dom as this jar of hearts (it actually makes me think of the beautiful, beautiful song) and how she's so breakable and how Lysander knows her better than anyone- better than even herself. That's how I see them too, and, gah, you captured them beautifully! ('it's always been dom&ly or ly&dom'- beautiful!)
You really have a thing with shipping Dom off to Beauxbatons, don't you? LOL. Dom needs to stay at Hogwarts! With Lysander! Gah. And how she said that she was going to marry her one day- I can't even describe that.
Thanks so much! (I shall reply to your review in the morning. :D)