I really enjoy reading this story, good job on it. :)

This story was amazing. It pulled at my heartstrings with the child abuse and neglect that happened in the story. I almost (literally) cried. It was just so endearing. I was extremely overjoyed with the happy ending Deidara, Sasori, and Gaara received. You're an interesting writer and I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future.
Until then, Peace Out!

Aw this was very sweet and touching. Just...wow.

This story deserves much more reviews! The second last chapter really made me cry *sniffle*. Poor Deidara. The way you portrayed Gaara and Sasori ... I hated both of them at first because of their attitude to Deidara but I loved how you made them slowly accept him.

The epilogue was awesome *_* Yay Gaara X Sasuke! I wish you expanded a bit more on that pairing though; "Itachi's brother" (I always likes how Sasuke is referred to by that by the Akatsuki members)

THAT WAS SOOO GOOD!

After reading this, MOST (not all) of the Sasodei fictions I've read in the past suddenly becomes somewhat 'cheap' lol

To be honest, I was interested at first because it had an 'M' tag on it, I was kinda... (okay , REALLY) hopin there was, you know, some smut, BUTTT

It surprised even myself to become hooked and keep reading this until the very end. They were very in character, I like the slight sadistic trait in Sasori that you showed when Sasori threw Dei the ICEball and split his lip. But then you delicately balanced his personality and always made him do those things because of logical and good reasons. And, yes, you probably heard this a million times but i'm still itching to mention it too, I LOVE DEIDARA'S childishness and his niceness and all his trying-too-hard and cute selfishness. Conceited, but somehow just makes readers pity and love him even more and more.

All the other supporting characters like Gaara and Chiyo and Ebizou and Temari also has strong personality that they didn't become as mere puppets to fill in the story.

I don't think it'd be as good if you'd put sex scenes or that sort of it to this. It's a breath of fresh air that I can actually enjoy a fic without the usual smuttiness. perfect beyond words.

I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews! It's such a wonderful and heartfelt story, I honestly loved it. It was so original, and well thought out. This is such a promising story, the ending made me want to cry.

I loved the personalities and characteristics portrayed in it; there was such an authentic feel to it. This was one of the first few fanfics I've read on this site, and I'm glad I've come across this one.

You've created such a lovely knit of family out of the Akasunas and Sabakus. I loved how protective they are of each other, and how hostile some can be. There was a nice vibe to the variety of characteristics.

I'm just in complete love with Deidara's entire character, down to his fake cheerfulness. It's nice how you've made him fake with his public art and so true to his private ones. It was so heartwarming to see how Sasori just accepted him at the end.

I'm in love with this story, and your other ones too (Jail Birdsequel). I hope you write out more; I simply cannot wait to read another!

Awesome! Really good, and so so cute, I love that Gaara gets to live with Deidara after his grandparetns died. :( I knew it was probably coming, but I liked them. Great story!

waaaaahhh i love this storyyy

XD

Wow, that was one of the most amazing peices of literature I've read on this website. It was so descriptive, and eccentric. I found the imagery, and the fluidity made it a joy to read. I plan on reading your other stories, and am quite excited to see more of your work. As my AP English teacher often says to me, "thank you, reading this was probably a main highlight of my day."

Wow, this was AMAZING. Very descriptive, cute, and totally in-character. I LOVED It! :DD

awwwww Deidara has a family now!

That was it ? It's over ?

But. . . But. . .

You just skipped all the details and important stuff ?

Nooo, go back. Put it all in there !

As far as stories go, this one was amazing !

Will you do a part two ?

awwww...i wish it didn't end there but it was cute! :3 goodjob! I loved this story.

Okay so I read this like a week ago and forgot to review, so I’m doing it now:

I absolutely adore this story, it’s so cute and, like Sakuya Izayoi said, such an original concept! Hmm, I’ve never seen the movie but I’ll have to check it out now…anyhow, great job; you’ve even inspired me to start writing again! ]

Update soon (this coming from the biggest procrastinator alive…)!

Keep being awesome,

I.P.E

Oh, I think I creid at the end.

All I have to say, it's one of the most original, and most beautiful stories I've read on here, and it deserves a lot more reviews.

I just hope one day I can write stories just as well as you.