I think of all the fanfic I've read, this is my favorite LFN story. I've always been intrigued with the tense mother/enemy relationship Madelline has with Nikita, so this was right up my alley. I think you have the characters down pat. Very nicely done. I'm going to look for more writing by you.

That was good. I likd tMaddys last statement. its so... her

Titles don't have to directly relate to a story/poem job:)

It was great. Nikita and Madeline...Great. I just want to know what's with the title? It made no sense...

Hmmm, interesting vignette