|Reviews for Underworld|
| DreamingPoet1988 12/24/10 . chapter 1
this was good.
| readingmama 12/24/10 . chapter 1
Love it. That was just what I needed down my chimney this year. Lol
| eyelubtwlight 12/24/10 . chapter 1
I love it! please please please continue!
| RoseyPosey72 12/24/10 . chapter 1
This story was great! Please continue. Great writing!
| CherBella 12/24/10 . chapter 1
Um... hell yes you should continue it! :) VERY hot these three. And love the straighlaced strict 9-to-5 Bella showing up in thigh-highs and heels at a sex club. Rawr!
| Princess Mishawaka 12/24/10 . chapter 1
YES continue this..please.
You are the best at writing lemons and it doesn't matter whether it's men or women or both whatever you really make it read so real. I really think Edward is falling for Bella but also there is the long lasting love between him and Jasper.
You can make it into anything you want. If you are writing I am reading it.
| ainsleyhayes 12/24/10 . chapter 1
Two words: yes. please.
Holy crap was this delicious. J/E/B is my OT3 (that sounds like a rap or something), and this was just... spectacular. Thank you so much for writing! Have a happy holiday season!
| BeeMonroe 12/24/10 . chapter 1
this is a great story. jasper being all dominant was hot as hell. i would love for this story to continue on. and i would love to see bella being a bitch in the workplace, i think thats ooc and brilliant.