LOVE IT, this is an amazing description.

"puckered and prematurely lined from squinting into a too-bright landscape."

I just loved how you took an obvious observation of his character, and wrote it in such a way that it felt like something new. What I mean is instead of saying, "He squinted" you expanded on that idea and made it into a story of it's own.

Giving the imagery of a person whose spent a lifetime in this terrain.

Anyway, I'm just writing so much because I just wanted to say, as little as this was: BEST.

Yeah, and I also feel like you could use this for something else as well, for your own story. (:

I REALLY LIKE THIS!

Several members of my family love this movie-and so I've seen it more than once...this was well done!

Excellent,

Clio