huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhhu :'(((((( i cried after reading this were streaming down my face really touched my heart.i was so heartbroken but at the same time, happy. it made me realize that you should do things that you really 't care about what people say about you,as long as you're not harming anyone. it really was an eye opener.i am so glad that i read this story of yours and thank you for sharing it to you and this fic is the beeeeeeeeeeeessssssssstttttt!go you! :D

Amazingness!

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Its so sad that the dude is dead though. :( I guess that's the risk of being a fireman.

aww that was really sad but very sweet. please hurry with the next chapter.

wow dramatic. i liked the start it really gets your attention

I thought I was teary for the other chapter, but when Riza broke down in tears, so did I. In the midst of such a sweet, happy little scene that was a lot of emotion that burst it's way through. This is such a wonderful little story.

snif, so touchy. And bittersweet...

Im wondering...only 4? because of the fireman? (you know Im bad trying to think xD)

Excellent! I love this, even if it did end kinda bittersweet. It fit the tone of the piece. Well done!

i liked your ending.

Roy would understand the tears.

Oh geez. Now I'm crying... this was beautiful...

- The Masked Hentai

It is such an interesting fic.

awwwwwwww, so sad. My fav pairing in FMA is Riza x Roy though. They match sooo well!

great story, i was very touched by it...:D

Awwwww...the ending about made me cry. That's sad :( Great job with the fic though. It was very enjoyable!

Very touching story.

Very nearly brought tears to my eyes...though I felt them threatening

Um, after the antics with Rebecca and the general lighthearted feel of the rest of the chapter, I certainly wasn't expected the chapter to end that way. You really threw me for a loop. Very sad, but a good chapter.

Oh, that's so sad! But very well written, as always!