 BlairBearxoxo 1/21/12 . chapter 1Ummmmm... this story has left me very confused. You should add more chapters that cliff hanger just made me want to find out why Hedwigs freaking out and who this Bently Dently whatever his name is. I also cant wait to see why the Dursley seem to remember this person that doesnt exist! :) Awesome story though it has left me with many questions you better update! :D |
 dad123 8/1/09 . chapter 1It is certainly original. I do not know where you could go with it? Do not stop. |
 goldacharmed 8/31/08 . chapter 1why has this not been updated in ages. i love it. its a great idea. i never understood how a muggle could use Harry's cloke, so i always guessed that if they where to use it, it would not work on them. i mean it must take some magic to work right. anyway i love the story. and i really hope you update this very soon. i hope you didn't forget about it. later dude. |
 DailyProphetEditor 3/20/07 . chapter 1Bentley Dursley... that does sound interesting. I'd like to see you update this. |
 Alexianna Black 2/2/06 . chapter 1i like it keep going |
 DarkAngel048 12/16/05 . chapter 1good fic. |
 cooroo 7/22/05 . chapter 1Interesting, VERY interesting... update soon please, 'cos this is pretty great. please continue. |
 Anora 11/15/03 . chapter 1Ah wierd... and I noticed how long you haven't updated this... Did you die? O.o man... I am sorry... *blushes* um... I will come to your grave some time then. *nodds* lol
course I live in the west of the u.s so... that might take a while. :D. Anyway even if you are a spirit you should still update! I could probably get my cousin to read this story too if you want me too. It seems like it has some great potental. *nodds* Anyway- update! |
 TuxedoMac 5/25/03 . chapter 1 Yes i must say this becuase of the layout and the storie as a whole but you suck there is really no where to go with it |
 amanda 3/8/03 . chapter 1 wow. that's a good story.:) |
 HGSKerriGDF 3/15/02 . chapter 1It's a really good story so far i think you should continue it im intrested.
Kerri |
 Tarawyn 3/15/02 . chapter 1Now that is good...never heard of something like that before! The thing, what could it be...time changing? Death Eaters? Can't wait for more. Write on! |
 Phoenix SilverWind 3/15/02 . chapter 1Great start! keep writing |
 Zorra Reed 3/15/02 . chapter 1more more more! |
 Child of Two Worlds 3/15/02 . chapter 1This looks really interesting! . They better not do anything to Hedwig. grr. I can't wait to find out what happens. . |